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long dark hair
falls into her face.
in a glimpse
their gazes meet.
the Beauty of Asia
- which leaps out of her eyes
like the dragon, out of the black -
has deep impact.

his inside warms to the image of her face
his outside shivers with the impulse,
with the longing,
to see that tempting beauty
smile.
©2008-2009 *SirMischa
:iconsirmischa:

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Nr. 14 .. inspired by a girl/woman I've exchanged glanzes with at the train station :D

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:iconmidnightmoonrise:
Wow, the imagery in this is amazing. I especially love the lines
"the Beauty of Asia
- which leaps out of her eyes
like the dragon, out of the black -
has deep impact."

--
"A country where flowers are priced so as to make them a luxury has yet to learn the first principles of civilization."
Chinese Proverb
:iconsirmischa:
thanks!! I just wrote what I felt :D

and another thanks!! Didn't have a comment for ages :D

--
"Isn't my ordinary life summed up, enclosed, made pointless by someone else's slightly less ordinary life?"

(Julian Barnes: Flaubert\'s Parrot)

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