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19 of 100 - grey , sad by *SirMischa:iconSirMischa:



like a deeper shade of grey
everything merges into
nothingness, meaningless,
avarage, a whole mass
of mediocraty
relatively grey
no colour at all
not high nor low
no feeling
not even sad
...
©2009 *SirMischa
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Nr. 19

hard to write something sad when you're not sad at all :-)

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It;s very good. More so if you wrote this while not sad.

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"Writers are liars my dear, surely you know that by now?"-Neil Gaiman

"Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." G.K. Chesterton
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thank you so much! I'm rarely sad, so I couldn't wait to be in the mood if I wanted to get done with the poem :-)

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"Isn't my ordinary life summed up, enclosed, made pointless by someone else's slightly less ordinary life?"

(Julian Barnes: Flaubert\'s Parrot)
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You're Welcome~

--
"Writers are liars my dear, surely you know that by now?"-Neil Gaiman

"Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." G.K. Chesterton

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