She's still asleep.
I hope I won't wake her up
I hope she'll eat something today
I'll be away and cannot check.
He's awake at last,
thought he'd never wake up.
I hope he'll hurry
so that I can leave for the gym.
He needn't know.
I wonder why she doesn't talk
to me about these things
after 10 years of marriage.
I wonder whether he sees me
getting fatter each day
for 10 years already.
I don't think that she
smells the other woman
when I come home
exhausted.
I don't think that he
knows that I stopt eating
when he is not around
for weeks.
"She'll never know"
he thought in his solitude
"He'll never know"
she thought in her solitude
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Number 20 at last ... took me some time
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 Wow, this is an amazing poem. I really like the fact that people can feel solitude even though they are around others. Very deep.
-- "A country where flowers are priced so as to make them a luxury has yet to learn the first principles of civilization." Chinese Proverb  don't know what to reply to such a nice compliment .. thank you !!!  -- "Isn't my ordinary life summed up, enclosed, made pointless by someone else's slightly less ordinary life?" (Julian Barnes: Flaubert\'s Parrot) |
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