heaven, if such place exist,
full of song and playing,
concerts books and small delights,
like palm leaves gently swaying.
heaven, if not make-belief,
is well worth of dying
but if it is right here on earth,
life is well worth trying.
heaven, if you like to dream,
is living, breathin, being,
hearing smelling, seeing,
is, if heaven, you and me.
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number 7 ... less deep than number 6
 I think with a bit of irony at the beginning .. but in the end (especially the last line) I've been pretty ernest  Comments
 Very Good
 I like this a lot -- "Writers are liars my dear, surely you know that by now?"-Neil Gaiman "Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." G.K. Chesterton thank you!
  -- Woman, without her man, is nothing. Woman: without her, man is nothing. (statements showing the importance of punctuation) Your Welcome
-- "Writers are liars my dear, surely you know that by now?"-Neil Gaiman "Fairy tales do not tell children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed." G.K. Chesterton  like this, delves into thought but not too much that causes the mind to be lost to madness of thought.
-- ~Callous Bitch~ thank you for this comment! gives a new aspect to my way of thinking about this poem .. and hey, maybe that's what I've been intending to do .. thanks!
-- Woman, without her man, is nothing. Woman: without her, man is nothing. (statements showing the importance of punctuation) not a problem my dear
-- ~Callous Bitch~  Wow this is very good. I especially love these lines
"but if it is right here on earth, life is well worth trying." -- "A country where flowers are priced so as to make them a luxury has yet to learn the first principles of civilization." Chinese Proverb thank you very much
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