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white skin is tempting touchably
under a black cover of cloth

luring from every visible patch
softness under softness
with individual qualities,
respectively

a shy glance, combined with
the attractive angle, the head is bent at

deep dark eyes framed by
      silklike black
flowing over shoulders of tender stature
merging into the cloth
      covering a body
                 of longing
©2008-2009 *SirMischa
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This one was random. I really like watching beatiful women and enjoying their beauty. Some words to the form: I like the English progressive verb form. For me, it sounds like flowing and feels really good. That's why I use it so often to describe beauty. What do you native speakers of English think?

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:iconmidnightmoonrise:
Wow, this is amazing. It really captures the feeling of longing.

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"A country where flowers are priced so as to make them a luxury has yet to learn the first principles of civilization."
Chinese Proverb
:iconsirmischa:
thank you! :hug:

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"Isn't my ordinary life summed up, enclosed, made pointless by someone else's slightly less ordinary life?"

(Julian Barnes: Flaubert\'s Parrot)

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